Gender roles can be defined as the behaviors expected of males and female members of society . Gender roles different according to different cultures , for example The United States doesn't differentiate between men and women in the field of work while there are many people against woman's work in Egypt.
There are many people supporting woman's work .woman may be work to help her husband in financial matters.woman may be work to contribute to develop the society and make it better .She work to depend on herself and get confidence .
Some people against woman's work for some reasons .The first reason is their though that the main duty to women is household tasks and bring up the children while the men should work to earn money for their family . Women will neglect their children and their tasks at home .There are also many jobs that doesn't fit women
In my opinion woman has right to work to be a real member in the society and get confidence in herself ,so I support woman's work .Woman has the same rights as men . Women and men together can do change in the society to the better.
your draft is good but you need not to think in arabic when you write because arabic makes your structures wrong.
ReplyDelete1. Gender roles can be defined as the behaviors expected of males and female members of society . Gender roles (are)different according to different cultures , for example The United States doesn't differentiate between men and women in the field of work while there are many people against woman's work in Egypt.( agood introduction)
2. woman may (be) work to help her husband in financial matters.
3. woman may (be) work to contribute to(participate in) develop(ing) the society and make it better .
4. She work to depend on herself and get confidence (confident).
5. Some people (are) against woman's work for some( various) reasons .
6. The first reason is their though (that they think )that the main duty to women is household tasks
7. The first reason is their though that the main duty to women is household tasks and bring up the children while the men should work to earn money for their family .(rewrite the sentence using correct structure and correct meaning).
8. Women and men together can do change in the society to the better (can change the society to a better case.).
good essay veky your introduction is good,but take care of spelling mistakes
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