Friday, 8 October 2010

pollution

      Pollution is contamination  by a chemical or other agent that renders part of the environment unfit for intended or desired us . There are many kinds of pollution in Egypt such as air , water ,and noise pollution .


     There are many natural and artificial causes of pollution .  Air pollution caused by many different productions such as car exhaust and  Nitrogen Oxides   . Water pollution caused by throwing rubbish in the water , industrial waste , and global warming while the causes of noise pollution may be traffic noise , generators , and air conditioners .


     Damage of the nervous system , liver and kidney damage , cancer, bad weather , and premature death are effects of pollution on people . The government do its best to face this problem . it  fines people on loud noises and throwing garbage in the water . The government try to  aware people the danger of pollution on their future .
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4 comments:

  1. Samah11 October 2010 at 00:21

    Thanks alot for the first draft

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  2. Samah12 October 2010 at 02:32

    Pollution is contamination by a chemical or other agent that renders part of the environment unfit for intended or desired us . There are many kinds of pollution in Egypt such as air , water ,and noise pollution .


    There are many natural and artificial causes of pollution . Air pollution (is) caused by many different productions such as car exhaust and Nitrogen Oxides . Water pollution (is) caused by throwing rubbish in the water , industrial waste , and global warming while the causes of noise pollution may be traffic noise , generators , and air conditioners . (try to mention more causes for pollution to make the paragraph longer)


    Damage of the nervous system , liver and kidney damage , cancer, bad weather , and premature death are effects of pollution on people (write the effects on a separate paragraph)

    . The government do its best to face this problem . it fines people on loud noises and throwing garbage in the water . The government try to (make people) aware ( of) the danger of pollution on their future .

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  3. heba13 October 2010 at 09:54

    good essay vico but you need mention more causes

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  4. nivine15 October 2010 at 07:15

    hi veko good essay ,your essay has specific purpose , the sentences are simple and clear ,each paragraph has main idea but there is not enough information to support main idea ,take care of grammar rules, revise capitalization

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